Hello Buisness Bloggers!
Hope you all are having a great week! Today my blog post will include my second shot at an elevator pitch. I had my roommate record me instead of using my webcam like I did last time. From my first elevator pitch I changed a few things. I received feedback that I was nervous and shaky, and I was. In my second try at an elevator pitch I tried not to show to the camera that I was nervous. I also received feedback I could elaborate more and I tried to fix that also in my second pitch. (Please excuse my hair in the video, I was having a really bad hair day. )
Totally understand your product more than I did the other week. SO good job on making a few corrections and changing things upa little bit. I can definitely tell you did not use a webcam which is also good. I did the same thing the other week, and this week I chose not to use to webcam per the Teachers request. Here is a link to my blog. http://stephenclegg.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteI like the concept Andrea! One suggestion that I have is to work on hand movements during your pitch. Your hands were a little fidgety and that can give off the impression that you are nervous or anxious during an interview. Otherwise, I think the content was good.
ReplyDelete- Your TA Mentor,
Anna
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ReplyDeleteHi Andrea
ReplyDeleteYour idea is awesome and I want keys being on my phone being an actual thing. You spoke clearly and I understood your idea. You played with your phone a little bit which was distracting but I totally understand fidgeting when nervous. I play with my hair when I'm recorded and I have to work on that.
You can check out my elevtor pitch here! http://darby95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Andrea! I really like this idea! I would love for this to become an actual app! I currently have a keyless car and I really like not having to dig for my keys all the time but it would be even better to not have them at all! I also like your deliver of the pitch and it was a nice touch to have your roommate film you instead of a webcam. Here is a link to my blog if you want to check it out! http://thereseverything.blogspot.com/2016/02/theres-my-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHello Andrea,
ReplyDeleteSo for your pitch please make it more clear that the app you want to design is for newer model keyless cars. I feel a little left out because one of the cars I'm currently working on is a 84 el camino. It would be totally awesome if I could make it keyless but alas that is way out of my budget. Maybe list off a few car years, companies, or models that in theory could support your app. Also include a few details as text to be read after the video pitch. I say this because you had my attention and I'd like to know a little more about your app but I'm to lazy to go through the rest of your blog. One question I have is about security. How are you going to sync the app with the individual car? I see theft being very possible if someone hacked you app and had access to any newer model car they wanted. That idea makes me happy keyless entry on my car is not an option.
Here is my pitch:
http://dcbostwick.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html